I like your comics very much. They have an artwork that I could only dream of at this point. However, the humor is sometimes very hard to get and the English is too strict. It throws me off that there aren’t any contractions, it just doesn’t flow smoothly.
Keep up the good work, and while I’m posting I hope you don’t mind me shameless plugging: http://fakelife.pcriot.com/
Thanks for your comment. Yes, you can tell I am struggling with the writing. My editor corrects my English (which is not my first language) but he leaves the writing style to me. He always says that my comic strip is strange/weird and only one tenth of the time he thinks the strip is funny.
I think my goal is to make a light-hearted comic and I don’t necessarily strive for big laughs. I think my goal is accomplished if someone really wishes he/she could visit Chloroville (as an imagined town) and meet the characters there.
By the way, I have checked out your comic! I don’t have any comment so far because it has only started! I will definitely go back for a visit to see the progress.
I like your comics very much. They have an artwork that I could only dream of at this point. However, the humor is sometimes very hard to get and the English is too strict. It throws me off that there aren’t any contractions, it just doesn’t flow smoothly.
Keep up the good work, and while I’m posting I hope you don’t mind me shameless plugging: http://fakelife.pcriot.com/
Hi Douglas,
Thanks for your comment. Yes, you can tell I am struggling with the writing. My editor corrects my English (which is not my first language) but he leaves the writing style to me. He always says that my comic strip is strange/weird and only one tenth of the time he thinks the strip is funny.
I think my goal is to make a light-hearted comic and I don’t necessarily strive for big laughs. I think my goal is accomplished if someone really wishes he/she could visit Chloroville (as an imagined town) and meet the characters there.
By the way, I have checked out your comic! I don’t have any comment so far because it has only started! I will definitely go back for a visit to see the progress.
Cheers,
Victor
Nice character design on Aaron.
Kandy Kornis a design masterpiece.
Bengo