March 29th, 2008
#11 Jon-Jon Speaks at the Green House
This strip concludes my first 3-strip long comic with a “story arc”. I have already received a comment from the webcomiclist.com forum, and Allanwood writes:
Your art is great. Like, I’m really impressed. It looks so vector it almost reminds me of 3d (in fact, it could be 3d, and you could’ve just done a good job masking that). Good stuff. Nothing really struck me as funny but you’ve got time to hone that skill. Keep on keepin’ on!
Thanks 
This strip was particularly difficult to write because as I was finishing it I knew it wasn’t really funny and I had been begging my friends to help me make it funnier. Those bastards! Never willing to help! Just kidding. I will strive to make the next set funnier. Fingers crossed.
“Fellow citizens of Chloroville, please don’t throw tomatoes at me…”
“Fellow citizens of Chloroville, I announce the banning of pepper spray…”
“Fellow citizens of Chloroville, my opponents criticize me for not being green enough…”
See? I try to help, but none of the suit your taste…
Comment by OneOfTheBastards? — March 31, 2008 @ 4:02 am
Hey you are not one of the bastards
The ones I contacted were “writers” but they never responded.
Comment by Victor Wong — March 31, 2008 @ 7:03 am
It doesn’t always have to be ”funny” funny, you know. I think it’s just cute. I like it
Comment by Kat — March 31, 2008 @ 3:12 pm
… that hurts so much more than being called a bastard…
Comment by NotOneOfTheBastards — March 31, 2008 @ 9:27 pm
Hey “NotOneoftheBastard” (note: he’s actually my friend) I wanted you to enjoy the surprises of the strip more than asking you for help… but if you prefer collaboration next time I will let you preview my strips
I do consider you a writer and a poet, but those “writers’” occupations are really writers.
Comment by Victor Wong — March 31, 2008 @ 9:46 pm